How can I word this to make it more interesting for my biography project?

This is the beginning of it and I word things horrible and I was wondering how I could make this more interesting for the beginning of my project; On August 4, 1961 in Honolulu, Hawaii Barack Hussein Obama II was the son of Barack Obama Sr and Ann Dunham.

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  1. In Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4, 1961 Barack Obama Sr. and Ann Dunham gave birth to their son, Barack Hussein Obama II. Barack Obama Sr. and Ann Dunham gave birth to their son Barack Hussein Obama II on August 4, 1961 in Honolulu, Hawaii. Barack Hussein Obama II was birthed in Honolulu, Hawaii by Barack Obama Sr. and Ann Dunham on August 4, 1961 in Honolulu, Hawaii. I hope one of these helped or inspired a better sentence :)
  2. On August 4, 1961 in Honolulu, Hawaii, Barack Hussein Obama II was born to Barack Obama Sr and Ann Dunham. or On August 4, 1961 in Honolulu, Hawaii, Barack Hussein Obama II was born, the son of Barack Obama Sr and Ann Dunham.
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